Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Realtor Fail

Ok, I shamelessly stole this off the internet, but I really couldn't resist.



I guess while I'm here I could also point out the following...
First sentence:
1. "dont" needs an apostrophe.
2. It's posing a question and should therefore end with a question mark.

Second sentence:
1. "this" - should be capitalized
2. "and look at the price!" should be set off with an em dash and not a hyphen

Third sentence:
1. "Near new and down a quiet Cul De Sac" - The wording is awkward (change to "Fairly new," maybe?).
2. "Cul De Sac" is hyphenated and not capitalized.
3. "North" - not capitalized
4. Not a full sentence

Fourth sentence:
1. "dont" needs an apostrophe
2. Needs end punctuation after "again"

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